I think that what you composed made a bunch of sense. But, what about this? what if you added a little information? I am not saying your content is not solid, however suppose you added a title to maybe get people's attention? I mean Start new topic is a little plain. You ought to glance at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create news headlines to get people to open the links. You might try adding a video or a related picture or two to grab people excited about everything've got to say. In my opinion, it might bring your posts a little bit more interesting.